When we showed our final cut our group had reason to be confident that there would be little feedback as our shots where so fast and tight and every small and vital element was very carefully taken into consideration. But as with every film not everything was perfect.
The class first talked to us about the positive parts of the film they mentioned that we had included a slick match on action, also that pre prepared items worked well and effectively for example the way Lyle rushed to hide all the cautiously placed Tottenham items to show how he feared the gang finding out his true identity. Miss Allison mentioned how we started with a strong opening scene and that it was very interesting shot to have used. We were told that our fridge shot was carefully planned and some of our shots where unique.
However all film productions will gain some negative criticism. We were advised to have a sound-ridge for the opening shot so you could hear Lyle’s ringtone before there was any pictures on the scene. We were told our mirror scene had little impact so we deleted the zoom so it would snap onto his arm to purposely highlight his Tattoo
Receiving constructive feedback from peers give you more knowledge to edit and better our production so it will appeal to our targeted audience. After the feedback we listened to the notes and added what we thought was necessary to enhance our production.
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